Review: The Unspoken Name – A Saga of Badass Lesbian Orc and Wonder Bread Boy


Title: The Unspoken Name
A.K. Larkwood
Tor Books

Genre(s): Epic Fantasy, Portal Fantasy
Subject(s): Gods, Coming-of-Age, LGBTQ+ (main and secondary)

Release Date:
Feb 11th, 2020
Page Count: 464 (hardback)

Rating: 6.0/10





What if you knew how and when you will die?

Csorwe does. She will climb the mountain, enter the Shrine of the Unspoken, and gain the most honored title: sacrifice. On the day of her foretold death, however, a powerful mage offers her a new fate.

Csorwe leaves her home, her destiny, and her god to become the wizard’s loyal sword-hand — stealing, spying, and killing to help him reclaim his seat of power in the homeland from which he was exiled.

But Csorwe and the wizard will soon learn – gods remember, and if you live long enough, all debts come due.



Turns out I have a few things to say about this book, so to keep everything organized we’re doing sections today. Huzzah!



Unconventional But Likeable Protagonist

Csorwe is a female orc and also a fighter who’s pretty laid back–almost humble–about being a well-oiled sword swinging machine. That makes her a bit of a unicorn in a genre that lauds its “badass” female human characters. She’s skilled and pragmatic and levelheaded, which is a super underrated character trait, and just plain readable. And the contrast between her calm and Tal’s anxiety-ridden disorder is a joy to behold.


  Fun and Genuine Character Interactions

The dialogue is pitch-perfect and arguably the shining point of the whole thing. From scenes of vulnerability to wry sarcasm to fuck-it anarchy (mostly on Tal’s part), they do much to convey the characters’ personalities and their relationships. Csorwe and Tal’s dynamic is pure schoolyard antagonism and entertaining as hell to see played out. Though I’m hoping the sequel adds a few more layers to them because the 24/7 sniping (and nothing else) is going to get old pretty quick.

The slow-burn romance between Csorwe and Shuthmili is also one of the highest points of the story. I mean, Shuthmili is a great character to begin with–her surface coldness a product of a life that’s always been about fearing and being feared for her powers–and her journey of learning to see choices beyond ones that have been spoonfed to her is a nice parallel to Csorwe’s own journey of independence (and I would say better written than Csorwe’s).

The two together are cute and sweet and make me smile–what more can you ask for?


Cool Worldbuilding Setup

Dying worlds and broken gods and airships. It’s like the book knows me. Oh, and any author who includes a sentient and intelligent serpent race in their story has my eternal love.




Picturing this World in My Head is Like Walking to the Grocery Store Without My Contacts On

You can have an interesting broad scheme for your worldbuilding but drop the ball on the details. And that’s the case here.

This is a story that hops through different worlds, but if you ask me to sketch out what each of them looks or feels like, I’d shrug at you from across a blank page. At best I’d call the settings minimalist–and nothing wrong with that, no one needs a two-page description of the texture of a tavern wall–but mostly they’re a frustrating landscape of vague shapes and smells. It’s like squinting though a mist while a tour guide yammers at your ear about how wonderful the place looks and how rich the culture is–all well and good except you can’t see any of it.

The snake world near the beginning is pretty interesting, but that’s the only one that left a solid impression. The rest are an absolute blur, to the point where I felt disoriented. I’m assuming this was a stylistic decision on the author’s part, but it makes the story resemble too much of an elongated dream sequence. And with an epic portal fantasy, it just feels like a lost opportunity.


Sethennai the Wonder Bread Boy

Speaking of blurs! Let’s talk about Belthandros Sethennai. Oh, Sethennai. Sethennai the poster boy for not living up to a badass name.

You know when your friend tells you about their celebrity crush and the person in question turns out to be a bland white dude whose appeal is completely lost on you, and you can’t even differentiate him from the previous bland white dude they were crushing on, so you’re just sitting there thinking, “This is the greatest mystery of my life”? Well, that’s Sethennai. Minus the white bit.

The book tries to make me believe that most everything in its narrative orbits this man. He’s the “kindly” mentor/savior figure who rescues Csorwe. His quest for the reliquary is what propels the storyline forward. Women swoon over him. His mentees fall over themselves to try to please him. It’s devotion at its finest, and all I want to know is WHY. Just why. What makes him so special? From Csorwe’s point of view, I kind of understand; he pulled her out from a horrific fate and I imagine a life debt makes for some thick rose-tinted glasses. But what about everyone else?

The characters tell you that he’s charming and suave and convincing. Whether or not he actually is any of those things is very much the greatest fucking mystery of my life, because at the end of the day, I don’t know who Sethennai is. He’s clear paint smeared atop a clear canvas and just about as exciting and remarkable.

And his weak characterization affects other major aspects of the story, like his quest for the Reliquary. In order for me to have cared about this plotline at least one of the following had to be true:

(1) I’m interested in the premise of the quest itself
(2) I think Sethennai is an interesting person
(3) I care that Csorwe cares about Sethennai

And…yeah. None of those were happening.


Lackluster Character Development

This also leads back to good ol’ Belthandros! (He’s out here just ruining everyone’s day, isn’t he?) The other reason why Sethennai had to be a solid character is that both Tal and Csorwe’s storylines lead back to him. So the fact that he isn’t makes Csorwe’s journey of self-discovery, and kicking herself out of the nest, so to speak, less impactful than it should have been. And Tal’s journey is even more underwhelming. If I have zero impressions–good or otherwise–about the man they’ve had this complicated and mostly-one-sided relationship with, then I can’t be expected to feel much for a series of character developments that directly depend on the guy being at least somewhat complex.

Also, there’s a big gap in Csorwe’s development from Csorwe the Chosen Bride and Csorwe Thereafter. From 14 years of living in a convent and being slated for death to being told you’re now a free agent with a future, and the transition between the two is basically non-existent. No exploration of how she’s had to adjust, or how her world views have changed, just a “Okay, I was living in Point A, now I’m living in Point B. The end.”


Okay, I know, that seems like a lot of ranting. But I did mostly like the book! On the surface it’s an enjoyable story with great potential, and it’s got a set of main characters (minus He Who I Shall No Longer Name) that interest me enough to keep going. But things start fraying when you try to delve deeper, and I just wish it ended up being more than what it turned out to be.


(Review copy provided by the publisher for an honest review)



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acquadimore February 23, 2020 - 1:14 pm

I have absolutely no context for any of this but the “wonder bread boy” part made me laugh. I don’t like convenient time jumps inside the book, but I think I still want to try this (…I’m even a little less intimidated now that I’ve seen a not-completely-positive opinion).
Great review, and I hope your next read will be better!

Kathy @ Pages Below the Vaulted Sky March 3, 2020 - 6:27 am

Haha thank you And for sure, give it a try! it’s not one of those super dense adult fantasy stories with multiweaving storylines, so I think it’ll make for a good breather between heavy reads.

bookbeachbunny February 23, 2020 - 1:42 pm

I’ve seen a couple of books now with Orc main characters. Sounds interesting!

Kathy @ Pages Below the Vaulted Sky March 3, 2020 - 6:17 am

I’ve seen a few around, too! But I wasn’t really compelled to pick any of them up before this one. 🙂

Mogsy @ BiblioSanctum February 23, 2020 - 9:39 pm

I loved the beginning of this book, but wasn’t crazy about the middle. I feel the same way about the characters and world-building and agree with a lot of your points!

Kathy @ Pages Below the Vaulted Sky March 3, 2020 - 6:21 am

That’s funny because I actually had a harder time with the beginning! The time skip kind of threw me off lol. But hopefully the sequel can iron some of the problems out!

24hr.YaBookBlog February 24, 2020 - 5:57 am

I’d seen this Unspoken Name around a lot recently, but I honestly had no idea what it was about. I’m glad I read your review because I’ve realized this book, while interesting, probably wouldn’t have been my kind of read. Great review! 💞

Kathy @ Pages Below the Vaulted Sky March 3, 2020 - 6:04 am

Thank you!! I’ve been looking forward to it since it was announced and was definitely expecting more from it. Or rather, something different! I had a more traditional high fantasy type of story in mind.

maddalena@spaceandsorcery February 24, 2020 - 12:42 pm

Poor characterization is hardly an incentive for me, but I can see there are other elements that balance this out, so I will certainly give this one a spin one of these days…
Thanks for sharing! 🙂

Kathy @ Pages Below the Vaulted Sky March 3, 2020 - 6:16 am

It’s definitely worth a read! I’m crossing my fingers that book 2 fixes some of the issues with the characters, because it’s one of those series that I really *want* to love!

@lynnsbooks February 24, 2020 - 2:13 pm

I’ve only skimmed this as I’m about to pick it up next week. It seems to be receiving very mixed reviews so far.
Lynn 😀

Kathy @ Pages Below the Vaulted Sky March 3, 2020 - 6:00 am

Oooh looking forward to your thoughts on it! I know some people are loving it, buuuut it’s got a few issues for me. 😀

Dani @ Literary Lion February 24, 2020 - 2:43 pm

I was really interested in this books cover, and I love the idea of a lesbian orc! I totally know what you mean about worldbuilding falling short though, I’ve read books like that before and ugh it’s one of the worst things.

Kathy @ Pages Below the Vaulted Sky March 2, 2020 - 6:24 pm

Yeah, the main character is super unique and definitely one of the best parts! I’m just hoping we get more on the worldbuilding front in the sequel.

Susy's Cozy World February 25, 2020 - 2:12 am

Oh my, I had a great time reading your review! I was very curious to read your rant about Sethennai and it was fun! I agree wholeheartedly with all you have written here (I think I can just delete my review and leave a link to this one, is much more fun 😉 )

Kathy @ Pages Below the Vaulted Sky March 2, 2020 - 5:14 pm

Haha thanks, Suzy! He probably shouldn’t have bothered me as much as he did, but I did have some fun writing out the rant so that’s a plus. 😅 And nooooo I was going to put a link to YOURS on mine! 😛

waytoofantasy February 25, 2020 - 12:46 pm

Fantastic review, I’ve heard some similar things so I’m thinking I’m going to skip this one for now. Your review title is amazing. 🙂

Kathy @ Pages Below the Vaulted Sky March 3, 2020 - 5:21 am

Yeah, it’s definitely not a “banging pots an pans* EVERYONE GO READ IT” book for me. But still worth checking out! And ROFL it was a long day and I had fun coming up with it 😂

Alicia @ A Kernel of Nonsense March 2, 2020 - 5:33 pm

I like the sound of Csorwe. Levelheaded protagonists are definitely ones I am often drawn too. I love snappy and fun dialogue so that is definitely a plus. Sad to see it was a bit of a letdown when it came to world building though. Enjoyed your thoughtful review!

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Belle March 4, 2020 - 1:58 pm

LOLOL the bland white boy comparison made me laugh a little too hard because it is all too relatable 😅. Also, the synopsis of this story sounds really cool—it’s too bad the characters and world-building could use some work. Awesome review, Kathy 🙂


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